Monday, September 8, 2008

Response to Peer Review - Essay 1 Draft

Thank you Stephanie Ludwig. Your responses were very helpful. I did go back and change my title page. I continued my introduction following the title. I read through the 2nd paragraph, and was not quite sure what I needed to change, so I left it as is. Also, I search the MLA format regarding the number of dates that could be entered, and I didn't find anything regarding that, so I left those as is as well. I did center the works cited as suggested though.

I only had one review to reflect from, and all of her suggestions were greatly appreciated and taken into consideration. I think that it is most important to focus on the introduction and the conclusion because that is what most individuals remember.

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